by Runner Jun 7, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
You woke up one morning, |
by shelby
That is one of the sadest things i have ever read its making me cry:'( but i love it ur really good!! |
by Mel
Wow that like made me want to cry. there were a few parts that didnt flow greatly...but all the emotion and everything made up for it. great job. |
by Razorblade
This a great poem! |
by Sarah Ann
omg girl that is great i really loved it...what do you mean its not good...i loved it. it was beautiful and sad at the same time...and it had a good flow. keep it up. xxx |
by Runner
Thanks for commenting on my poem!! Check out my other ones too!! |