im sorry that this poem isn't good but i just felt like writing a poem like this...i don't know why though....please tell me honestly of how you felt about it!!

Christy

wow...tears are welling up in my eyes. That was incredbile. Is this true?

Thanks for commenting on my poem it means so much. :-)

Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

No this poem isn't true...but one night i wished it was true..then i had a nightmare of it happening so i just felt like writing a poem of it.

Christy

Hey Christy, I thought your poem was really good. Its weird hwo you could think something then ahve a dream about it happens to me all the time. Well anyways I liked it keep it

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that was amazing it took my breath away

Thanks for commenting on my poem!! Check out my other ones too!!

Christy

omg girl that is great i really loved it...what do you mean its not good...i loved it. it was beautiful and sad at the same time...and it had a good flow. keep it up. xxx

This a great poem!

-Taylor

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I'd love to help your friend.

Wow that like made me want to cry. there were a few parts that didnt flow greatly...but all the emotion and everything made up for it. great job.

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.:MEL:.

That is one of the sadest things i have ever read its making me cry:'( but i love it ur really good!!