WOw...I love how you used the sand castle to describe our unpromised life. very creative. you are a great writer. Take care xxx

You are a talent, this poem shows us how much we see examples of life through all the small things... 5/5
Love yeh
Andrew

Wow...what a great way to put it. I love the comparison to life's downs and sand castles...creative. I think the ending was a little rough but still very good! I enjoyed this piece very much!! :)