Good bye

by Beth   Jun 7, 2005


I could never stop loving you
even if i try.

I will love you until the day i die.

Now all i can do is sit and cry.

Ever seance the day you said good bye.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jay27

    Hi Beth, thanks for your kind words about my poem.

    I'm giving this one a 5, I know there is error in spelling, and it is very short (who says it has to be long anyway?), but the pure naive innocence of youth in this poem really appeals to me, and i have no doubt you mean every word.

    Keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by jessica(i love you ry)

    hey thankyou for the comment your poems are very good we have similar writing i like
    i hope you enjoy my poems i enjoy yours
    writing is a gift and you have it
    enjoy it
    thanks
    jess

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