First of all, I'd like to say, thank you for the comment.
And about your poem, Not to bad. I loved the last 2 lines....shows true love ... if you can't have her, you won't settle for less. Aww, thats cute. Keep up the great work and keep in touch.

<3 Heather.

WOW ur poems r so0o powerful!
I look forward to readin more!