ok ...

as i look deeper into ur eyes i see that u are totured by pain.

as u draw me closer to that pain it hurts me to know what u have been through all these forsaken years.

u open the door way to ur inner most thoughts.. should i go in or should i ever keep?

all i know is that u are scared and need some one to cuddle you and tell you it will be alright.

tell me what u think..sorry its so late :)

christina...i like the verses but they dont rhyme and if i put them in it will throw off the RS..sorry..also this poem was more pointed towards me.. i was thinkin that in his eyes it showed that he was fake and was torn away from me...ya know?
if u have suggestions for that id like them a lot!! thanks for the help!
~*+Random Insanity+*~

This poem is really great. I love all of your dark poems!