good poem keep up the good work

good poem keep up the good work

Firey red gates-- I liked how you repeated it. It gives it more...image...I dont know what word Im looking for---anyway, good job!

Thank you very much for you comments and I appreciate the feedback.

Hey Braxton!!! I thought this poem was really cool. Write another one real soon!!!!!! Can't wait!
Love Brat

Wow...ur just great...ur a really really strong person..i can't believe it...i'm soo soo soooo sorry about ur loses. If i were in ur situation i have no idea what i would do.. my best friend is my life, and my sister and i are extremely close...u r such a great person...stay strong and remember they are watching over you...make them proud
love always
michelle cavalier