Silent one (vampire)

by silhouette fairy   Jun 8, 2005


Silent one, why don't you speak?
is it the darkness you wish to seek?

no I've been there, saw it all
i have a voice it lies where darkness falls

oh silent one why don't you cry
cry for your loved ones that will all soon die

no, i can't for it is i
that kills the loved and leave them to die

silent one why don't you love
love like an angel from up above

no love, for no love will i give
for i am death that kills to live

oh silent one why don't you sleep
sleep in the night to see the day weep

no i can't for if i do
i will see that love is so very true

silent one why do you call
call me to my dark, scary hall

no you must come
when i leave you'll be numb

oh silent one why must i die
to die by your hand will bring a joyful cry

no you will die and join me
so just let go and do not plea

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    Wow, this is really dark and morbid! Your poems have such a range of ideas in them. In this poem I liked the switch in characters (who is speaking) I try to do this also but find it hard to keep it sounding poetic. It sounds incredibly sad and resigned, as if you have given up all hope. I'd suggest tweaking the rhyming a bit and adding in some punctuation to make it read better.

  • 19 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    I LOVeD it it was WicKed TransCEndenT
    AWSomE
    ~HazE

  • 19 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    thank you for commenting Silver Wolf. i'm glad you comment because not too many people do

    *allalone*

  • 19 years ago

    by Fig

    oooh. its dark!!! i like it. quite different to alot of your others

  • 19 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    they're lazy i think that's the only reason

    please comment:(

    e-chan