I like it, but the 2nd and 3rd stanza are perhaps a bit too similar (esp the last line in each)...and also:

"That I shoould die."

Have an extra "o" in there ^

The poem is pretty upsetting. True emotions brought out well though....Nice repetition for the most part.

xxx

Lol and the problem with that is? Nothin wrong with seeking a bit of attention. X