Aww. how elegant. Reminds me of the old pop song of Nsync's "That's When I'll Stop Loving You" or something. But I definatly like yours better =P Very Nice job, hun. 5/5

<3 Heather.

well done baby thats really good!!! u r so flippin gd at this lolz luv ya xxxxxxx

This is sssssssooooooooooo good...i love this poem...i really think that this should have like a lot more votes and comments than you have...great 5/5...if you ever need to talk you know i'm alwayz here 4 u...take care...

Wow, amazing... (just to let you know, the gold under the rainbow is a superstition like-thingy) 5/5

Your poems very good it rimes and got a good meaning. I like it very much and gave it a 5/5! the ending could have been better but still it`s a great poem!