by ŦÅüċhÌήğ ỀνĬĽ Jun 8, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
*I wrote this for school...Im putting myself in the place of someone homeless, hehe, :o)* |
Its smthin so nice to put urslf instead of sme kinds of pple to kno wht do they feel..!!..great job..i liked it so muchhhhhhhhhhh.. |
by Sourav
Wow! It's wonderful! Great job! |
by ScarletHaze
very good hun one of the best you have wrote xox |
by Victoria
Thats really good you have an excellent imagination very creative I dont know what its like to have no home but you have descriped really well! :-) |
Aww. so gorgeous hun. Beautifully sad. Great job with the poem... 5/5 |