Aww. so gorgeous hun. Beautifully sad. Great job with the poem... 5/5

<3 Heather.

Thats really good you have an excellent imagination very creative I dont know what its like to have no home but you have descriped really well! :-)

take care friend

very good hun one of the best you have wrote xox

Wow! It's wonderful! Great job!

Its smthin so nice to put urslf instead of sme kinds of pple to kno wht do they feel..!!..great job..i liked it so muchhhhhhhhhhh..