Ooo liked this style! Different but also kinda original, dont know how u managed to make it rhyme too! Mus b natural talent :-) xxx

style works very well, builds the poem up making you read faster. brill job ell

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tanku both xxx

i really like the way this poem rhymes its easier to read this way it is written and yet still contains such emotion i enjoyed this one alot even though it was sad 5/5,

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