Ummm...I don\'t have a title

by Shy   Jun 8, 2005


I'm slipping quickly
off the edge
i ran to far
and can't turn back
i try to grab on
but no ones there
nobody ever cares
I'm living in constant fear
of what may happen
if I'm pushed to far
will i slowly slide to the bottom
or maybe i will free fall
and get it over with fast
cause no ones coming
to pull me back
and prevent me from
letting go and giving up
i was hoping to be rescued
but since that can not be
i will allow myself to die swiftly

*I wrote this during my seventh period class, in about 3 minutes, these are the original words i have not changed them so i may edit it sometime in the future, but in the meantime please vote and comment*

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  • 17 years ago

    by xXSomeoneLoveMeXx

    Great poem...keep up the great work! Please comment and rate my poems...thanks XX RAZOR

  • 19 years ago

    by gasping for air

    this is good, you ahve some good talent if you wipped this out in that short of time... i do it once in a while when im real emotional.. but yeah.. if you elaborate and put some more description in it you've got an even better one... great start tho
    amanda

  • 19 years ago

    by Kalika

    Very nice. I like your style of writing, it is very unique. This was an excellent poem, extremely sad, but I still enjoyed it. Very emotional,

    Kalika

  • 19 years ago

    by Kalika

    Very nice. I like your style of writing, it is very unique. This was an excellent poem, extremely sad, but I still enjoyed it. Very emotional,

    Kalika

  • 19 years ago

    by Kalika

    Very nice. I like your style of writing, it is very unique. This was an excellent poem, extremely sad, but I still enjoyed it. Very emotional,

    Kalika

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