I enjoyed it for being a rough draft. Strong emotions. I shall check out more of your work. 5/5.

Very nice. I like your style of writing, it is very unique. This was an excellent poem, extremely sad, but I still enjoyed it. Very emotional,

Kalika

Very nice. I like your style of writing, it is very unique. This was an excellent poem, extremely sad, but I still enjoyed it. Very emotional,

Kalika

Very nice. I like your style of writing, it is very unique. This was an excellent poem, extremely sad, but I still enjoyed it. Very emotional,

Kalika

this is good, you ahve some good talent if you wipped this out in that short of time... i do it once in a while when im real emotional.. but yeah.. if you elaborate and put some more description in it you've got an even better one... great start tho
amanda

Great poem...keep up the great work! Please comment and rate my poems...thanks XX RAZOR