that was.....intersting lol havent seen a poem like that.....it was very good!

Ooo creepy. Theres a spelling mistake in the second to last line (cough) You're right this is quite odd, I think it was quite atmospheric and you have some good imagery in here also.

I have no idea what this poem is about, but i feel strong emotions here...alot of anger. i loved this poem so much!