hey mark. loving your writting style. its mad. i always come on and check if you have written ne new onez. everyone ive read, i give a 5 for. im inlove with your poems.

Deep... im another one in love with your poems. i love 'em!
nice job!

LaterZ,
BX Girl

I've read all your poems and I think they are all great, even if I haven't commented on them all.
I was captivated from the first line and it stayed with me after I'd read it, I had to come back and comment.
Hope to see more of your pomes
*VioletRaven*

Sorry, poems*. Might help if I could spell. LOL.

^^pomes LOL. AnYwAy, I liked this I thought it came off as really sincere, as in you do know what you're writing about. Alot of sad poems I read sound very self pittying but in this case I found you just stated it how it was and I liked the honesty. Well done :)