Simply amazing..

Its really sad that its always the dad that abuses their daughters. Your poem really tells what alot of teenage girls are going through in their life. All in all, that was a good poem.

"She Awoke In Heaven
Death Had Sought To Kiss Her
As She Cuddled Amongst
Her Sorrows Final Whisper"...beautiful

this poem is amasing Nikki, thanks for the comment on my poem :) you're on my favorites now too much love -steph

Wow this is excellent

Hey powerful poem, really striking if you get me, you have a talent keep going.

xXx

Hey Niki I see you are still in great form A beautiful poem up to your usuall standard Brilliant
Missed you too
*HUGS*
John
P.S I gave it 5

Amazingly well written dark poem

Just to let you know I DID not copy someones poem they must of copyed mine im honest! And please belive that poem was from the heart !! sorry . and i like ure poem its good !

First off, i want to thank you for your comment on my poem.

Second i loved this poem. great show of emotion. just reading it i could feel the emotion flowing from it.

Hello huni, i totally love this poem, i think u r a really great writter, i can really relate to how you are feeling, life is hard and just wen u think it can't get worse it does! but u have to hang in ther ok hun? coz everyone goes thru pain in ther lives but u have to hold on, life is what u make out of it and if u look on the bright side of things then it will come a lot better, plz listen to me and i hope that my advice helps, just try to be happy and live each moment as if it were your last coz u never no what is going to happen.... i would be really happy if u could open up 2 me and tell what your life is about and why you feel so hurt, i hope that u find happiness and im always here if u need someone to talk to

keep shining coz u r very talented

luv Maddy xxx

Nikki- I absolutely loved this poem! It was really beautiful & sad. Love your work.
Take care & God bless!
Happy Thanksgiving!!

Holy freaking goddess you have a HUGE Talent! I am offically blown away. You write about great topcis with your own beautiful style and amazing imagery. WOW, thats all I can say. wow.

-Mikochan

Wow! brilliant poem. very strong imagery and filled with emotion. heart renching. a very good piece of art.

keep it up.

xXx

(5/5)

The way you described your anorexia or the forum is identicle to me cept for the laxitives... yet.

Just saying. lol. It was good hearing the same from someone else. Proves i'm not alone in the way i think., which is comforting.

Lv A, x

Beautiful

Great poem really sad, Your poems are brilliant hun take care Sarah xxx

That was really beautiful. you are very talented.

That was really beautiful. you are very talented.

Fantastic poem def got my 5 vote, the wording you have used is great and it flows throughout perfectly, keep writing and take care sarah x

Ths last verse , alone, is worth double the price of admission!