by Lovely Bones
I liked this line: |
by fastforward
Your poems are very interesting. nice work. |
by StephanieH
Wow, this is a very STRONG well-writen and touching poem, you did a fantasic job, i read atleast 4 of ur poems on here, and they're all meaningfull and touching, GREAT JOB. 5/5 Plz check out my poems, thanx. |
by TheSickness
I love it |
by Aussie
Gr8 poem...i like the ending. finly away from pain. it's a pretty poem:) |
Now this poem is ABSLUETLY BREATH-TAKING! i mean it really rocks!! i luuved it! it had a deep meaning to it... |
by Domino0792
Beautiful poem ...... i could feel the emotion ..... well penned ..... 5/5 |
by 19Rusty
Wow what a poem, the imagry combined with the hurt of abuse, very nicely done images were done perfect it was like I was there the entire time. |
by xXits meXx
Great poem..i almost cryd..great imagery.. i could almost see everything as u wrote it!! 5/5 |
by Sasha
Aw. that was so sad. i thought it was gonna be about a ocean and thats it but it relaly had a lot of meaning, you are a great writter |