Great poem Kat like always
lylasFFF
~Erin

Amazing poem!

<3, Katie!

very long poem!

Okkkk, too much of the drip dropping, it’ll make people think it’s gonna be too complicated to read.
Try it like this maybe

the water faucet drips slowly
pain and misery
is drifting slowly
out of my body

Drip drop drip drop

a knife by my side
a wound on my wrist
conciousness drifting slowly
from my blank mind

Drip drop drip drop

Etc if you get what I mean. It’s really good don’t get me wrong, but I think it might be better like this. I’m only saying this as you have joined the club for help on your poems and advice. That’s all I’m doing ok