wow....i want to say more but....wow...im speachless... AMAZING JOB!!!

oh my gosh...i absolutely loved this poem... it sounds just like me...well how i feel...or felt..(lol) anyways this was just so amazing i'm like speechless... great job. definately 5/5

ttyl
Maddy

wow sweet twist at the end lol I thought it was to someone but its you, why do you feel that way???? ttyl

Excellent.

This poem would have been quite average, hadn't it been for the last sentence, which really made me think. And that is one of the most important things about poetry: to make you think.

Nice

WOW this was really great. It was really well written and it flows ver well. Very unique wording and shows true emotions. Great work!!! 5/5 =)

I believe "worse" should be "worst" when written "you deserve the worse" perhaps I'm mistaking, though. Nice poem....filled with anger and hate....I liked it. Totally reminds me of myself sometimes.

Please read my poem and comment on it? It's called "Pencil"...thanks.

WOAH!!! holy crap!! the ending totally got me by suprise!! i love that poem!! omg.. im still like... holy crap... from the ending!! aweosome job!! BRAVO!!!

As nearly everyone else said, the ending was unexpected, which is what made the poem go from good to great. But over all it was an excellent write and it flowed very nicely. Kudos.

I really like this poem. It seems dark. Excellent job!

Love,
Tiff

Great job! I loved the way to do it! i'm sure alot of people can relate in this a very good way!! I agree with Robyn Park, it flowed very nicely! 5/5!

Excellent flow and as everyone else said, amazing ending. I've never read a poem like it... very unique. i must read more of your poems!

wow that was realy good

omg this is a great poem...:)

wow, that was a really good poem, the lines were really short but that made it really effective. i aslo have to agree with everyone else the ending was amazing! keep up the good work and i look forward to reading more xxxxx

Wow, great ending. Really loved it!
~Emmy

i love the ending. that was a great great twist. Nice work!

Very cute/short poem! 5 I can totally realte to it! <3

loved it...loved it...i love it!!

lol.. i think i read this a LONG time ago and at the end i was like WOAH.. but i didn't remember when i was reading!! i new you were in my favorites but i just couldn'te remember reading this one!! and at the end i was like WOW.. and i immediately voted 5 and it goes.. you have already voted so.. GREAT JOB for making me go WOAH twice!! lol.. awesome. i adore your writing.. you are so talented!! keep it up
love always,
Abcede