by Yasmine
Woow! This seems so special and amazing! the way it's written is unique! 5/5 |
by Jenni Marie
This is beautifully written....good flow throughout, and i particularly liked the ending...beautiful and classy. |
by Andrea
That was great i can realte to that big time..you took the words right outta my mouth...Andrea |
by Andrea
I want you to know i cant really relate to that..i feel the same way about the guy that made me feel that way and made my life like that..keep up the good work.....Hugs,Andrea |
by confussed
Your poem is amzin i love it! Can really feel how you feel so much x x x |
Holy crap that is an amazing poem. I don't know if you remember me, but a while back I used to read a lot of your poetry. The poem was good, and angry, but the ending is what really struck me because it changed the whole poem. I am honestly blown away by it, I was not expecting that ending, but it was perfect and made the whole poem so much more personal. What an amazing write! |
Very good.. me likey likey! |
by Airika
Omg that is really good. This is really really good.. |
by Bec Paech
Wow... This is fantastic :) |
by Melissa
Wow! that was a reat poem! 5/5! |
by NearlyCrazy6
Wow, i am also speechless! awesome poems |
by pookiengurgi
You're being a little too harsh on yourself-it was an excellent poem until I realized it was about yourself..that's good that you can accept your faults and confess them-not so good to make it seem like you're beating yourself up over it.Good job,tho. |
by Rain Lopez
Its a great poem |
Good ending |
by william
Great poem rolo i feel the same write now. |
by azii
Omg amazing job i love it |
by A l y s s a
Ireally like this. Amazing job. Keep it up :) |
by JanaeNae
So concise! wonderfully written...so much emotion in so few words...great job 5/5 |
by sarah
Oh my gosh wow my parents r telling me 2 bequite but goodness that is so beautiful like seriously like wow i dont even know what to omfg u r like wow i wish u knew what im trying 2 say but goodness gracious please keep on doing wat u do WOW |
by sarah
Oh my gosh wow my parents r telling me 2 bequite but goodness that is so beautiful like seriously like wow i dont even know what to omfg u r like wow i wish u knew what im trying 2 say but goodness gracious please keep on doing wat u do WOW |