im so sorry

i'm really sorry bout your dad. good job.

hey erinn...im so sorry to hear about your dad...i cant imagine how hard that must be to go thru all that pain...stay strong and ill pray that u do...i gave you a 5/5...good job...keep writing
-keli

very good poem i loved it...sometimes it can be quite unbelievable how the police work but if you write poems about your dad and only remember the good times it makes it alot easier

awww...That was sad and good. I am so sorry.

This is one of the best poems ive ever read i cried because of its reality

I really like this poem it relates alot to me. my dad got killed with a gun but a drunk guy didnt have it he did. he committed suicide and i was only 11. it hink about him every day and i cry all the time. well all i have to say is stay strong and you'll do fine and just remember that ur not the only one who goes through this so ur not alone!
~~!*!KIRSTEN!*!~~

sorry for your lose hon. it is devastating to lose someone like that. beautiful poem. My dad is still alive but i will never see him again. he is too drugged up to care about my sister and i.

wow I am so sorry that this happened to you but this was a great great poem keep it up

omg this poem is sad i hope u see ur dad again it sux losing someone i feel bad for u just keep trying to find him maybe one day u will u never no so yah good luck w/ the search ok email back at x3jessx3x3@yahoo.com

Thanks for all the comments yall!! yall have helped me alot!!!

omg! i am so0o sorry!!!!!! i was crying by the time i got to0o the end! thats crazy! that man shoulve gone to0o a life of jail! not only for murder but for drunk driving... stay stong ull be with him one day! 5/5
~*Amanda*~

i'm sorry...i lost my mom when i was 8 and my brother was 2 to hepititis B...its not the same but i feel your pain.

that was very Good!!! i can like s0o0o0o feal your saddness! keep up the great work!!!

your right it would fit under lost love and i'm really sorry about your dad

wow sweetie that brought tears to my eyes. i cant say iknow how you feel but i can say im really sorry and i could only imagine how hard that is on you, your sis and your mom. i wish you'll all the luck in the world. praying for ya. 5!

wow i know how you feel i lost my daddy to when i was just 2 years old by some animal with a gun. i really understand how u feel i actually wrote one like that too. it will be nice if u would check out my poems. much love chas!!!!!!!!!1

hey girl great poem i loved it ......
im sorry abt ur dad loseee be strong girl ...... he is watchin over u and ur sis have faith in God :)
always smile
peaceeee

I wrote you a poem of how i lost my dad in a way just like you thats why i cried when i read this

Your poem is great. Nice work.