wow that is so sad. im so sorry for wat happened to u. no words can help u thru that but writing poems will help ur heart. my dad lives over seas n i never get to see him n everytime i hear about a guy dying i call my dad just to make sure he is ok. good luck with everything and keep writing ur good at it

What an awsome poem. I'm so sorry. I never lost my father but friends. I wish you all the best in your future. Take care sweet heart

Love, Angie

heya ur poem was really sweet and im so sorry aobut your loss
keep up the excellent poetry
take care sarah x x x x x x

because you're my friend , send this to ten people in the next five minutes
an u will get a kiss on friday from the love of ur life. Don't break the
chain and ur crush will ask u out. Tomorrow will be the best day of
ur life. However, if u don't send this to at least ten people by midnight
tonight, u will have bad luck in ur life. Just copy and paste

wow you are a very talented poet keep up the good work! and im srry bout your dad! but im sure he would be proud of your work right now!

wow that really suck, im sorry you lost your dad. your poem was really great. its horrible how such good poetry has to come from such horrible things.

sad... but good. im sorry for your loss, you and your sis strong.. it is a good poem though...
-K

hey i loved your poem it's really god i'm sorry for what happen to you. but you know that life goes on and later you are going to be with him and never separate again. don't worry.

that was a really good poem. sorry to hear that it happened to your dad. if you want you can check out mine some time. take care and keep up

by ada a.k.a trusty. it was good.

ur poem is good and im srry about ur dad thats so horrible!!

it literally brought tears to my eyes asome poem

awwwwww wow that was so sad, just keep your head up aye, that guy should of gone to jail!!! i lost my mum at two years old, and im 15 now, so i no how hard it is, but stay close to ur memories.
a very nice write aye
5/5
xox Bam

wow tha was really good ..i really liked it...srry bout ur loss though...hope u feel better

I think that these poem is excellent and i love that you can tell about things that have happened to you are people that you know.

This was really sad and I am sorry for your lost. Always keep him in your heart sweetie!

Excellent, amazing, brilliant. Its everything.

perfect ...5/5
*Vanessa

omg thats so sad. i feel for ya. one of my friends dads died to and its a hard thing to go throu he still remember the night and it was like 4 or 5 yrs ago.

i am so sorry for you and your sister that you both had to go thrue that
good luck on your poems

A beautifully sad write, so sorry you lost your dad. But hold his memory close in your heart everyday. You and your sis have a very special angel watching over you. Stay strong......

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela