This is a really nice poem..
i like it alot..and sorry about your dad..
i lost my dad too..3 months ago..
he had cancer though...but still ut's harder..
harder and harder everyday...
but think of it as he's protecting you... he's your angel...he's always with you
that's the way i think of it...
well the guy should've gone to prison..
still though i'm sorry..

:(

5/5 wow ur very talented. n i no just how you feel i lost my dad when i was 4.. n my names erin haha guess we have a lot in common. but look at some of my poems and tell me wut u think. i bet ull b able to relate to them. once again dont stop writting ur very talented. and im very sorry for you loss.

I am so soory to hear about that. i couldnt imagine what you're going through. great job on the poem though. you poem probably means alot to many people. well amazing job, keep up the good work.

Hi i cant imagine losing a father but this poem was realy great 5/5

This poem gave me goose bumps... its honestly so beautiful but i am so so sorry to hear this... i know i don't even know u but heres a hug from me k.. hehe
5/5 4rm me :) awesom
xox

I know kinda how you feel. I lost my dad when I was 12. good poem tho.

Nice poem! Love It!!

Omg im sorry this happened to you and your sister... i hope you guys are doing better... well you must be because you are 17 already but just because you grew doesnt mean you are doing better, so im sorry if you aint. i wish you the best of luck with you family eventhough my comment is kind of late. im sorry for your loss!! 5/5

OMG i am so sorry for your lose. i know how you feel.