Well so far its good and I understand how you feel cant wait to read more.

take care

hey this was pretty good you should submit the whole thing
~Freak~

your so emo!.. oh wait no.. i meant.. your so damn hot.. haha i love it .. because its true.. people so stereotype other people.. and i wanna read the rest damnit!.. Ice Ice.. whoa baby.. haha im sorry.. im losing
awesome i enjoyed the sample piece..
<3 Darien