this is possiblally my favorite poem of your i have read! you worded everything so well and it flowed excellently! My school was kinda going through something like this at the beggining of the year. we had about 6 deaths from car accidents, hard on us all. just kinda makes u realise things u know?

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love

This poem just shows the distance that can and will grow between people, but friendship and love doesn't just dissapear.

Nice one hun; brought a sense of reality back to me :)

Love Yo' //
- Kals.

it has a wonderful rhyme. I enjoyed'
reading this one sooo much.
take care, Marjan

I enjoyed this one...
Try < cuz nothing feels right I fear >
might fit better.

ok i'll definately keep my eyes open for you, i'm just starting to go through there again recently because i'm finding time to now again. c u there, but i've gotta go for tonight, still gottas do some stuff around the houre :( lol PEACE

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love

great poem! i'm bored so i read a few of your poems.. =) 25/5!

I really love this one. its so true and so real. well i guess htta means the same but you know what i mean!!
take care and keep writing, x x x