Addicted to you

by *mandi*   Jun 9, 2005


One more hit
one more high
just to get me by

no feeling
no pain
its driving me insane

heartbroken
lonely tears
there goes 2 worthless years

one more hit
one more high
just to get me by

so many people have made comments saying that it didnt make sense or it was "scary" all i have to say is that its deeper than whats said on the surface i cant explain it in fact i shouldnt have too if a real poet had read it:} hey you cant expect to say something about my writings and not take a blow back.

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  • Hey there! ur right ,it is deep to me its like ur taking a drug to numb the pain of a heartbreak or of sum loss, so little words so much feeling.Dont let anyone bring down ur ego, great work and keep it up. Hope all goes well wiht ur sis ,luv muches ,cutie

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