Twinkle Twinkle Falling Tears

by †JustAri†   Jun 9, 2005


*This is another one of those darkened nursery rhymes...I dunno, I'm bored.*

Twinkle, twinkle falling tears
Cutting will release my fears
Careful blood does pour out fast
Staining the days that have passed
Twinkle, twinkle falling tears
Scars will tattoo all my years.

*Yep, that's it! PLEASE VOTE & COMMENT, LEMME KNOW WHAT U THINK!*

© Copyright Ariana 2003-2005

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  • 19 years ago

    by mkhoviyeun

    omg.. i love the twinkle twinkle little star song.. and this is one of a great verse! =) i like it! 25/5!

  • 19 years ago

    by stephanie

    nice poem 5/5 its very interesting..but i like it.....htanks for commentign on my poem it means a lot to me...plz comment/vote on some more oi would appriciate it.....
    -*- stephanie -*_

  • 19 years ago

    by Princess09

    damn lol thats good keep writtin ur great for real

  • 19 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    So cool hon,
    You write beautifully

  • 19 years ago

    by A.Hill

    decent! keep it up...