these are so cool to read and sing the song along that go with it that kids here all the time! i did one for a school project once, fun to make also! always write and always take care, i'm always here

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

Loving the last line hun.
"Scars will tattoo all my years."

- Amazing stuff, you're good at those quirky little nursery rhyme poems. :)

Love yew,
xxx - Kal.

that was an awesome poem...i liked it a lot

plz check out my poems...plz vote and comment!!!

hey, I think it's very good and clever. Check out some of my stuff if you have time.

xoxoRachel

that is really good!! 5/5 keep it up..if u get the chance ckeck out mine please

Wo. O_o I just got on my computer...hey my poem's the highest r8ing 2day....
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COOL!

Thanx every1 4 your comments! I will personally thank u in a comment on your own work. PEACE AND SO MUCH LUV EVERYONE!!!! //ari\\

U know i didn't actually think it was all that good. But since everyone else likes it...well OK! ^_^

woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
i'M b0R3d.

cool poem/song thing yea lol.......neway gr8 job 5/5

Hey, i'm not on the highest r8ing list anymore...:P haha that's cool! Peace All of Ya and Goodnite! //ari\\

hey.. this is really good..i liked it alot... 5/5... and thanks for the comment on mine... and for the title suggestion thinger... i may use that as the title..but im not sure yet..

decent! keep it up...

So cool hon,
You write beautifully

damn lol thats good keep writtin ur great for real

nice poem 5/5 its very interesting..but i like it.....htanks for commentign on my poem it means a lot to me...plz comment/vote on some more oi would appriciate it.....
-*- stephanie -*_

omg.. i love the twinkle twinkle little star song.. and this is one of a great verse! =) i like it! 25/5!