by Tom Swart Jun 9, 2005
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Memories of My Shadow |
by Tom Swart
I'm not sure where the question marks came from but they are gone as is the last ray of this days setting sun... couldn't resist. Thanks for your comments and the critique. |
Third stanza, last line, what's with the two question marks? Might want to edit that. |
by Celrien Abi
Heya Tom, i really enjoyed read this peom and i'm looking forward to reading more of your work. |
Thank you so much for recomending this poem to me! I loved it. I felt emotion throughout reading it, and the ending was so powerful, my goodness it was a good poem. I think that not matter who you are, after reading this poem you will find a way to conect to it. Well done! |
by Chelsey
This was a sad, but very wonderfully written, touching poem. You are an excellent writer, and thanks dearly for the comment on mine. It means alot. |