by Eden Jun 10, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Called to fall and known to cause fear |
by Fig
ooooooooooooooooh!!!....can use my favourite word here, MORBID, very good, very well expressed, fluent, yadda yadda, brilliant and MORBID....he he....ok...going....*retreats to corner and breathes into paper bag* |
thank you , that was an awesome poem an dhope to here more. :) any way i gave u 5/5 cuz it was so raw and new. |
wow...this is breathtaking. wow...absolutely beautiful!!!! you're such an incredible writer. keep up the amazing work! |
WOW that was such a strong amazing powerful poem! The ending ugh wow. Amazing write. I loved every bit of it. My eyes where glued to the screan. Excellent excellent work. <3333 |
by Treakle
This is a really good poem, shows the true inosence of children. Flows really well, i think you're a really good poet. Thanks for writing something so inspiring. |