Just a little prick

by silhouette fairy   Jun 10, 2005


I pick up a shard of glass
prick my finger, squeeze it
watch the blood drop like rain

suck up the blood
the taste comes to me
hits me like a freight train

i look up and there you are
watching me, crying with cute little sobs
how could i betray you?

but no, you stay
prick your finger
we share our blood

together for eternity
together we will stay
till death do us part

we shall die together
we shall cry together
we shall fight together

we will show our eternal love
with our blood we join
now we are one, and one we will stay

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    This is a different love poem, the tone of it is quite dark.I think you should use more imagery to make it sound even darker (maybe more description of the blood) if you that is the direction you want it to go. I think it really hits on that feeling of intense desire and wanting to do anything for someone, and of being insanely in love, and you also show this with the stanza 'we shall...'
    I liked this for it's originality and unique scenario.

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    WOW..... excellent poem. reminds me of one person : ME.

    don't give up... w/e u do.

    big hugs,
    michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    I guess its true that love makes you do odd things! i like this poem, its short and sweet and oozing with emotion! xkimx

  • 19 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    Thanks katlynn
    allalone

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