Thanks katlynn
allalone

I guess its true that love makes you do odd things! i like this poem, its short and sweet and oozing with emotion! xkimx

WOW..... excellent poem. reminds me of one person : ME.

don't give up... w/e u do.

big hugs,
michelle

This is a different love poem, the tone of it is quite dark.I think you should use more imagery to make it sound even darker (maybe more description of the blood) if you that is the direction you want it to go. I think it really hits on that feeling of intense desire and wanting to do anything for someone, and of being insanely in love, and you also show this with the stanza 'we shall...'
I liked this for it's originality and unique scenario.