Do you, because i do

by silhouette fairy   Jun 10, 2005


Do you care?
because i don't
do you love?
because i don't
do you bleed?
because i don't
do you mourn?
because i don't
do you save?
because i don't
do you feel pain?
because i don't
do you cry?
because i don't
do you feel pleasure?
because i don't
do you wish to die?
because i don't
because of you
i do care
because of you
i do love
because of you
i do bleed
because of you
i do mourn
because of you
i do save
because of you
i do feel pain
because of you
i do cry
because of you
i do feel pleasure
because of you
i wish to live forever

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  • 19 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    thanks again for the comments Silver Wolf and i never noticed the twist until i reread it. thanks for pointing it out.

    *allalone*

  • 19 years ago

    by Fig

    ooooh! it has a sort of twist at the end and its all really good.

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