The color of my heart

once again thanks for the comments Silver Wolf. i'm glad you think that i am a very good writer. i didn't think i was but i guess im my toughest cridict.

*allalone*

wow, this is another great poem. you have such a different fresh way of writing. and you arer very talented.
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That was rather unusual. I did like that though. It seemed pretty cool.

well i'm glad you took time to read mine also, and i'm glad you don't believe is discussing what happens in your bedroom. i think it is nasty when people talk about that sourt of things in poetry or any other form. i'm happy someone liked this poem because i didn't think it was that great.
thanks for the luck

*allalone*

Thanks for taking the time to read one of my poems, and then commenting, I appreciate it.

Hey you have talent yourself, and you seem to be a sweet person. I like this poem, I believe we think along similar lines.

I dont write about rape or cutting because I have no experience of these matters, and I don't write explicit poems because I don't believe in discussing affairs of the bedroom.

But again, thanks for your time, and I hope you continue to write because it would be a waste if you didnt.

Best of luck "allalone".

~ Jay