Thanks for taking the time to read one of my poems, and then commenting, I appreciate it.

Hey you have talent yourself, and you seem to be a sweet person. I like this poem, I believe we think along similar lines.

I dont write about rape or cutting because I have no experience of these matters, and I don't write explicit poems because I don't believe in discussing affairs of the bedroom.

But again, thanks for your time, and I hope you continue to write because it would be a waste if you didnt.

Best of luck "allalone".

~ Jay

well i'm glad you took time to read mine also, and i'm glad you don't believe is discussing what happens in your bedroom. i think it is nasty when people talk about that sourt of things in poetry or any other form. i'm happy someone liked this poem because i didn't think it was that great.
thanks for the luck

*allalone*

That was rather unusual. I did like that though. It seemed pretty cool.

wow, this is another great poem. you have such a different fresh way of writing. and you arer very talented.
xxx

once again thanks for the comments Silver Wolf. i'm glad you think that i am a very good writer. i didn't think i was but i guess im my toughest cridict.

*allalone*