Drifting

by Lydie   Jun 10, 2005


If I feel unhappy,
Will you be there?
I want to know,
Just how much you care,

You say you love me,
But just how much?,
I miss your voice,
And your sweet touch,

You're never here,
You left long ago,
I can feel you drifting,
And I feel really low,

The thing is,
When you say 'I love you',
I want to, but I can't say,
That I love you too.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Minkus

    Quite good, but not quite excellent, I'm not sure why. The rhymes seem a little forced, maybe you should try freestyle.

    -David