Ooooo I really love this one. What a beautiful write......

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Heather, I truly love this. Beautiful and wonderful job. hugs, love, Ann

"not very good?" i think it's really creative and enjoyable to read!

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

Cool change from what you normally do :) I like it a lot, but I like the other two you wrote on the same day as this one more. You are an awesome writer Heather. I'll talk to you later, tata.

Eden

truly enjoyed reading it, but i do love everything of yours I read, you are so talentd, and so dimisional, which is what i love about you, you don't always do the same thing over and over, great job, I loved it........love ya Becky

Very good I really enjoyed reading it!

take care

pretty good poem heather, not your best like you said but not your worst either.

Well done.

I really liked it! The ending is awesome!
I like these lines:

"furnishing frail hearts and bodies, weak
as we face the agony all alone."

Keep it up~Holly

Excellent piece Heather-I do a lot of
Dark art-this sonnett as you call it
I am not versed in this form, but I am
sure you hit the target!