Not a whole lot can be said to criticize how you felt when writing this....it seems obvious that it contains spur of the moment emotions and feelings, not to mention thoughts that travel deeper than just the surface, with the help of control your words could relay such strong themes and messages i'm sure millions could relate to.....well written, minor errors from my point of view, only one actually.....best of luck in the future,
ps - not all people are even worth waiting for in the end