Aww, this is really sad, i liked it alot.. Great job. I reallly reallly liked it.

Love Alwayz,
Katie Schettler

Wow that was an excellent poem! 5

This was a pretty good poem with a great message. good job

I really liked this one. Very true. Nice job. 5/5

Yea, that's not right. This poem deserves a 5! I liked it :)
I read more!

awww! LOVELY!
sammi :) xxx

Hey, that was really good! I gave you a 5!!! :)

Excellent.

Aww. This poem was so good. There's just something about it that I like. Excellent poem, dear. 5/5 Keep writing! You are talented!

-Ice

wow...this was an awesome poem. great story line and great rhythm.
take care,
Renee

A nice steady rhythm throughout and good use of description.

Keep Writing
Nici

that was pretty good, it wasnt exellent but it was still good, keep writing and good luck!

This is a terrific poem. Very sad, but great words. Keep it up. 5/5

Love,
Tiff

Good job!! i have to give ya props! keep it up!! 5/5!!

very touching, real nice job!!!

Nice poem it is amazing i agree with all of them great job

Thats amazing it reminded me of wen my boyfriend will let me fall and then watch if he gos of with his ex n e way long story Chow darling :P! Comment and vote on some of mine

Erm, damn you.. The poem had me in tears after the first 2 lines..

Got my heart broken 2 months back and that is exactly how I feel.. Loved it even though I hate it for opening an old wound.. I'll keep reading some more poems of you:)

Best wishes,
Patrik

wow that was an awesome poem!!
luv courtie

wow that was an awesome poem!!
luv courtie