this is a very good poem thanx for commeting on my poem ... i relized i had ALOT of spelling errors (lol) but that was only because my computer had shut off on its on b4 i could fix any of them but at least you realised
thanx again
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Kare

this poem is really good hope you keep writing!!!

oh thanks for leaving a comment...this is one nice writen poem.......i gave u a 5!

wow....very deep. i love it!!

a few spelling errors, but an excellent write. it makes you think....and you want to keep reading to see what happens to the girl.....you know there are so many people in this world that do crave the attention, I think they miss out on it at home, or in their social circle, we all need approval, and we all need to be appreciated for whatever it is we do. So heres my chance to tell you, i do appreciate how much work you put into your poems, it does not go unnoticed....you are a very talented writer,maybe we should all jump on a chance to tell someone their good or that we appreciate them.....we could make a difference in their lives...thanks for sharing love ya, Becky

I like it, good wording, couple missspelt words but still enjoyable, dont worry about spelling, we all do it, has much has alot of us hate to admit it, well have a good night, and make sure lust for the limelite dosent consume you like the girl from your poem. ****5/5****

So many left aside , all wanting to be love and wanting some attention. I think if we all just look around our only circles we may find one or two people like that and if we could spend some time and should some concern, we would all be living in a better world. Lovely write.

Warm regards,

Steve

Wow hun this is awesome! xox