First Poem

by ♥JustLikeTheLadyInTheBlueDress♥   Jun 10, 2005


As i walk I'm all alone,
Because i cant find you any more
You disappeared in front of my eyes
Is this what happens when you die?

I cant feel you breath
I cant hear the sounds you make
I don't know what to do
I cant tell you anything

I'm lost with out you
I don't know what to do
No one knows how i feel
I don't want this to be real

As I sleep
I dream of something i cant keep
I dream of you and you are gone
maybe you've been hear all along

OK, well thats my poem..sorry if you didn't like it, but leave comments to help and rate it!!!
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  • 18 years ago

    by kittykat0232

    I LOVED THAT POEM!!!! i wish you would have made it longer though! but great job! 5/5
    ~*Katherine*~

  • 19 years ago

    by broken_dreams_broken _heart

    hey, this poem is good! its really heartfelt, and u know how 2 put ur feelings down into poetry. thats half the battle! keep writing, and dont put yourself down - its a good poem.

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