Strangely in Love

by Poetic Tragedy08   Jun 10, 2005


*I wrote this a year ago*

Something strange has happened
I'm in love with you
You told me the same
"I love you too"

Those words
To my thought were murder
Maybe this is a new start
Because I heard her

Abbey, I'm no longer in pain
Brandy, I've fallen for you fast
I'm no longer alone
I'm no longer an outcast

Thank you lord
For bringing her to me
She's opened my eyes
When I couldn't see

I hope she won't break my heart
Just like Abbey did just now
So let our love
Bloom it should be allowed

Thanks Brandy
I owe you one
You didn't let me fall
I hope we're never done

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Got a sense of an underlying gloat in this that's just barely noticable, well written.

  • 19 years ago

    by Rolo

    Not bad, but it could have been better. Good idea though.

  • 19 years ago

    by -Erin-


    It's an alright poem