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by Poetic Tragedy08 Jun 10, 2005 category : Love, romance / i love you
*I wrote this a year ago* Something strange has happened I'm in love with you You told me the same "I love you too" Those words To my thought were murder Maybe this is a new start Because I heard her Abbey, I'm no longer in pain Brandy, I've fallen for you fast I'm no longer alone I'm no longer an outcast Thank you lord For bringing her to me She's opened my eyes When I couldn't see I hope she won't break my heart Just like Abbey did just now So let our love Bloom it should be allowed Thanks Brandy I owe you one You didn't let me fall I hope we're never done PLZ VOTE AND COMMENT!
by Jason Meres
Got a sense of an underlying gloat in this that's just barely noticable, well written.
by Rolo
Not bad, but it could have been better. Good idea though.
by -Erin-
It's an alright poem