Aww, what an excellent poem! beautifully sad. Sweetheart, you're a talent! 5/5

<3 Heather.
ps so sorry about your disorder. Stay strong!

Amazing poem hun!! very sad but brilliant :) x x x 5/5!! i'm always here when you want me hun... x x x x i love you x x x

thnku xx

:( So sad, Toni. It's so wonderfully written hun, it really is. You have such a way of explaining things. You're so articulate :) Woop big word. Mmm, I don't really know what Dissociative disorder is, but I guess this poem is sort of self-explanitory. I'm sorry :( I wish I could do more ot help you hun and if there is anything, please let me know. I love you so much my little Bumweed :)

Please take good care of yourself.
All my love and chocolate fudge cake with ice cream..oo sounds good.
Laura/Agather/Bumfluff :)

amazing, excellent, fab poem, im always here hun, never forget dat,
luv ellie
xxx

This is really excellent. The flow is great and the rhyming unforced. Keep up the great work! 5/5

Wow! Great job. Keep up the writing.

wow this poem really had an effect on me im like stunned its such a good poem n i know it must have come from the heart as nothign so good could be writen purerly from he mind 5/5 gr8 work take care n keep writing luv rach

wow, fantastic. the opening stanza starts the poem off perfectly. 5/5 hun, keep it up, luv always -x-x-x-x-