I made a mistake on the last one this is the real one

by disturbed one   Jun 11, 2005


The day you came to me,
The danger I did not foresee,

You sucked me in,
Like a terrible sin,

When it came to girls, I always flawed
I think this time it was an act of God,

On the first day of school,
I thought I'd look like a fool,

When I saw your pretty face,
I know I could end my chase,

With this one act,
I knew God is a fact,

No more fear and fright,
I've seen the light

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jessie

    Aw, I like this one :)

  • 19 years ago

    by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life

    it's good keep up the good work.
    "you're a sweet person"
    **thax**
    always ~~~trusty~~~

  • 19 years ago

    by Jay27

    Hey, thanks for your comment.

    Keep up the writing, you have talent.

  • 19 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    i liked this one. sounds like it's about a very lovely person. good work and keep up the love cos thats what holds life together. good work
    love sammi
    xxx

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