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by Heather Jun 11, 2005 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
Alone, hurt, and crying wishing more and more of dying why wont he let her pick up that knife why wont he let her end this pathetic life he has no plan for her her life has been one big blurr drowning in her own tears no one knew she had these fears into sadness shes sinking fast forever wishing this breath will be her last pain has taking over now but ending it he wont allow stuck in a world swallowed by hate its not fair she cant choose her fate she begs him now to let her go unlock these chains and let the blood flow with every drop her pain goes numb she couldn't take what shed become with her last breath she thanks him for loving her so but shes glad he knew it was time to let go her pain was ended with that knife even he couldn't fix her LIFE
by Freakfall
good poem, well written 5/5. and thanx for the comment.