I would like to think so. It's too bad not everything is how we'd like it to be. It's also so sad that fathers who abandon their children don't realize the scar their leaving on their souls. Emotional write. 5/5.

Excellent poem...It reminded me of my friend who is always beaten by her father...and reminded me of myself...my father doesnt even know who I am. I hate fathers who leave their family...it is just so sad. This was very well expressed. keep it up. xxx

Good poem with a lot of good questions its sad when a child does not know their father.

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