wow, this is so good! i really like the thing about the smile, its so true. anyway, an excellent poem, well done!

awesome. excellent poem hun. absolutely amazing. well i loved it anyways lol. im always here if u need to talk,
ellie
xxxx

Another great poem. Keep writing. It seems tough rite now but it will get better. Promise.

Emma xx

wow another wonderful poem! really liked how u discribed the times throught the day/life...superb!!!
take care
xxxLoUxxx

Awww what a good poem..i loved it!! i liked the part about the smile also, sometimes i feel like thats what i have to do with mii life =/ great poem 5/5