by Michael D Nalley Jun 11, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
I used to run with the lost sheep that ran with Little Bo Peep |
by Justin
Very good poem I liked how you turned it into a poem using a nursey ryme and also included god in it yet you could still tell that it was about friendship, very very good poem and keep up the good work! 5/5 |
Very creative! Nice job. 5/5 |
Your poems always increase my faith in god....keep them coming...take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>> |
by Becky drake
awesom, I loved how you took a nursery rhythm of all time, and put it into a work about our Lord Jesus Christ. its also not coincendental that I read this, this morning, when I was having a hard time, with the enemy attacking me, and my beliefs, so God does do things his way.....thank you for sharing, I loved it...please it would be an Honor for someone of your talent, to look at some of my work, and honestly tell me what you think...please look at several of the featured ones, thanks, love ya becky |